Monday, 19 March 2012

Feedback from our class for first draft

The negative feedback we received will now help us to improve the film. From the feedback we now know we need to:

  • level out the audio
  • sort out the establishing shot and make it less shaky
  • make the fire effect better and more realistic
  • speed up the film, make it less boring
  • use the music in different ways to make it more interesting
The positive feedback we received included:

  • there is a good rangew of shots
  • the storyline is clear, helped by the institutions and narrative
  • the titles are good and clear
This helps us now improve the opening and we are now encouraged by knowing others like it.

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