Feedback from our class for first draft

The negative feedback we received will now help us to improve the film. From the feedback we now know we need to:

• level out the audio
• sort out the establishing shot and make it less shaky
• make the fire effect better and more realistic
• speed up the film, make it less boring
• use the music in different ways to make it more interesting

The positive feedback we received included:

• there is a good rangew of shots
• the storyline is clear, helped by the institutions and narrative
• the titles are good and clear

This helps us now improve the opening and we are now encouraged by knowing others like it.

questionnaire for elements

Elements questionnaire

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Institution of our film

We have now decided on the distribution company that we would use to distribute the film, and we have decided to use Momentum Pictures. The reasoning for this is because it is a british distributor that has distibuted many good british films such as The Kings Speech. It won 8 BAFTAs in February 2011, seven for the kings speech and one for The girl with the Dragon Tattoo. In the past they have won OSCARs, BAFTAs and BIFAs. This will be perfect for our film as it is meant to be a British mainstream film so this company will be good for this.

Target audience ideas

Our target audience will be a mostly 15-25+ year old base with a rough change either way, In this group the film will be aimed at a mainstream audience with a possibility of moving to film buff etc.

Films such as Spiderman and Batman have been aimed at this sort of audience and they have proved to be huge successes.

Other films such as Kick-Ass which you could be seen as a competitor as they are both about young aspiring superheroes. Kick-Ass was a huge success in with the teenagers so this would be a perfect audience for our Film.